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托福高分作文必背的转承词

2024-09-27 来源:华佗小知识

  一、对照(Contrast)

  whereas, in contrast, on the other hand, instead, however, nevertheless, unlike, even though, on the contrary, while

  二、因果(Cause and effect)

  because, because of, for, since, due to, owing to, thanks to, as a result(of), accordingly, hence, so, thus

  三、增补(Addition)

  in addition, furthermore, again, also, besides, moreover, what`s more, similarly, next, finally.

  四、比较(Comparison)

  in the same way, likewise, similarly, equally, in comparison, just as

  五、强调(Emphasis)

  certainly, above all, indeed, of course, surely, actually, as a matter of fact, chiefly, especially, primarily, in particular, undoubtedly, absolutely, most imprtant

  六、让步(Concession)

  although, though, after all, in spite of, nevertheless, still, provided, while it is true....

  七、例证(Exemplification)

  for example, for instance, that is, namely, such as, in other words, in this case, by way of illustration.

  八、总结(Conclusion)

  to sum up, to conclude, in a word, in short, in brief, all in all, in all, to put it in a nutshell, in summary

  九、推断(Inference)

  therefore, as a result(of), consequently, accordingly, so, otherwise

  十、时间和空间(Time and space)

  afterward, after, first, later, then, soon, outside, near, beyound, above, below, on the right(left), in the middle, opposite, in front of

  十一、启承转合

  1.启

  A proverb says...... At present.......

  As the proverb says.... Currently.....

  Generally speaking, .... Now,....

  In general, ..... On the Whole....

  It is clear that.... Recently.....

  It is often said that.... Without doubt, .......

  2.承

  First(of all), ...... Moreover, .........

  Firstly, ............ No one can deny that....

  In the first place, ......... Obviously.....

  To begin with, ......... Of course, .........

  Also, ....... Similarly,.........

  At the same time...... Therefore, we should realize that.....

  Certainly...... There is no doubt that.......

  In addition,..... What`s more, ..........

  In fact........ It can be easily proved that...

  Meanwhile......

  3.转

  But... Still, ......

  But the problem is not so simple...

  There is a certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem with regard to.......

  However,

  ....... To our surprise,..........

  Nevertheless, ........ Unfortunately.......

  On the other hand, .......

  Yet difference will be found and that is why I feel that........

  Others may find this to be true, but I do not. I think.....

  4.合

  Above all, In brief, ........

  Accordingly, ..... In conclusion, ........

  All in all, .......

  In other words, it is hard to escape the conclusion that........

  As a consequence, ......... In short, .........

  As I have shown/said/stated/.... In sum, ........

  In summary, ....... As has been noted, ....

  Obviously, ......... By so doing, .....

  On the whole, ..... Consequently, ........

  Presumably, ....... Eventually, .........

  To conclude, ...... Finally, ........

  To sum up, ..... In a word, ......

  To summarize, ......

  延伸阅读:托福写作高分备考的重点

  一、托福写作的立意

  由此进入破题与立意结合的阶段。充分的破题所积累的大量思维方向给我们以信心,要做的只有一项遴选工序了。而这选并不是闭上眼睛随手挑,而要符合以下条件:

  1, 要与论题相匹配。若论题问的既然是提高生活质量与否,一些无关紧要的改变就应该弃之不用,比如烹调时间缩短这一项改变,是事实,且未对生活质量有直接明显影响,就应该避免用作主要论点。

  2, 要能言之有物。这是再功利不过的一条标准。比如我自己提到了食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变,破题时觉得不无可能,真落笔时却不知道由何说起,如果选了这一条为一个主要论点,结果是我说了一句话就走人,那还不如选个能下笔,能展示语言功底,也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。

  3, 选择的无论是2个还是3个论点,内在一定要有联系。这其实是整个立意阶段的重头。要立意,就是要明白自己表达的对象是什么,明确立场。然后站在这个立场上,挑选支持自己的论点。

  托福写作破题结束后,第二要做的重要事项便是整理行文思路。破题过程其实是个发散思维的过程,而立意,则是要把思维收回来,组织化,理清它的脉络纹路,让他们按照自认为最有说服力的顺序排列好,准备落于纸上的过程。这个说服力的强弱,应该以什么标准判断呢?笔者认为,能说服读者的议论,在论点选择上应该遵循一个原则:三个(或者两个)论点不能在层面上有交叉,但要符合一条明线:支持全文观点。而最打动读者的论点选择,不仅遵循上面的原则,三个看似不交叉的论点间还有一条暗线贯穿一致。令全文浑然天成,回味无穷。

  立意的地一步,按照上面的原则看,当然是先确定观点。

  二、托福写作中需排除异己

  确定观点后,破题时得到的思维方向,明显不利于我的就应该排除。比如营养价值改变这一条,虽然速食文化的确对人体有害,但另一项速食:生疏和熟粗粮,就是向有益方向改变的,两者势均力敌,仅管是很容易想到,也很容易举例论证的论点,却不宜使用,因为如此贸然用了,有思维不缜密之嫌。然而,这毕竟是一块好啃的骨头,如果其他论点都不好论证,还可以回头捡起这一条来,隐去健康速食那个事实进行作文,当然,这依然是下下之选。

  之后,便该比较遗留的可能性论点,选取能言之有物且不交叉的项目,作为主要论点了。托福写作考试发散思维时,思维如洪水,席卷一切进入视野的可用之材,但大浪淘尽后,选择时就要格外注意这些素材的特征属性,看准了着手点才能下手。一个可能的论点必须作者有话可说才能选用,但如果对一个论点有太多话要说,就应该停下来,看看这些话能否安插在其他论点上。这也是出于观察论点间交叉性的需要。比如我选生活节奏改变,引发出速食对食量的影响,再引出对身体的影响,但第一个选择的论点是营养价值对身体的影响,两个论点就交叉在一起了。

  在挑选论点,寻找言之有物这个“物”的时候,一定要注意避免层面的交叉,而这个层面,也要从托福写作题目中来:题目问的'是对生活质量的影响,这些选择的层面一定和生活质量有关。生活质量又有什么层面呢?身体健康是一层,心理健康是一层,这两者合并在一起,是人类健康生活的基本要求,而物质享受是在基本要求上的锦上添花,又可以算一层,三层不交叉的层面就找到了。以此为依据,再回头找匹配的论点,事半功倍。此处也需要注意,破题时给出的方向只是方向,不是成熟的论点。有需要时,可以把匹配的几个方向糅合成一个论点,方便下笔。

  有些时候,在一些写作题中会隐藏一些论点,也就是暗线。这条暗线,应该是什么呢?是让托福写作从死板规矩的举例说理,三片豆腐块儿拼成的死文字,变成有思想,又灵性,能从纸上走出来,走进读者内心去的,作者的心声。这暗线,就是前文提过的,能赋予文章品格的,刚柔之论,是或者以情,或者以理,串联整篇文章。

  既然这条暗线要贯穿全文,就必须与各个论点有一定联系。而在串连所有论点的同时,要避免交叉,就使这个暗线出于一个全新的视角。之前笔者从题目用词的角度发散思维,再根据题目提问的出发点将发散开的思维分成三股收束起来。从题目本身入手,已无处再用力,可以使用的视角,只能从个人经验和知识中采凿-----而这正是独立写作的基本要求

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